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         <h1 class="display-1 hero-text" style="z-index:3; position: relative;"><span class="inner-glow ">Invisible</span> yet <span class="callout white">powerful</span></h1>
-          <p class="lead hero-lead">Upgrade to Tea - the revolutionary, cross-platform package manager. Say goodbye to slow & clunky, and say hello to fast & smooth updates. From the creator of Brew.</p>
+          <p class="lead hero-lead">Introducing tea - the revolutionary, cross-platform package manager. Say goodbye to slow & clunky, and say hello to fast & smooth. From the creator of Brew.</p>
           <p class="lead mobile-lead mb-5">tea... from the creator of <a href="https://brew.sh/" target="_blank">brew</a></p>
-          <p class="mb-5 hero-description">Introducing tea, the cross-platform package manager of the future. Say goodbye to slow package managers. With tea, simply type commands and it takes care of the rest. Get the latest version easily and support specific tool versions for different projects. Encoding dependencies in the README makes it readable by humans and tea, providing easier access for users. Experience better package management with tea.</p>
+          <p class="mb-5 hero-description">With tea, simply type commands and it takes care of the rest. Get the latest versions of open source tools and support specific tool versions for different projects. Experience better package management with tea.</p>
 
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-            <h2 class="black display-5 text-xl-center text-lg-center text-md-left text-sm-left text-left" style="z-index:2;">THIS ISN’T A PACKAGE MANAGER. TEA IS A UNIFIED PACKAGING INFRASTRUCTURE.</h2>
+            <h2 class="black display-5 text-xl-center text-lg-center text-md-left text-sm-left text-left" style="z-index:2;">THIS ISN’T A PACKAGE MANAGER. TEA IS UNIFIED PACKAGING INFRASTRUCTURE.</h2>
-            <p class="lead black text-left">And through that packaging infrastructure, we have plans of leveraging blockchain to help remunerate devs for their contributions to OSS. But first and foremost, we're a packaging tool that empowers devs to do what they do best, in the most equitable way possible.</p>
+            <p class="lead black text-left">And through that packaging infrastructure, we have plans of leveraging blockchain to help remunerate devs for their contributions to OSS. You can learn more about our grand ambitions for web3 by checking out our white paper <a href="/white-paper/">here</a>.</p>
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-        <p class="text-center">We're currently on tea <span class="release"></span> and our tea'm and community are working hard to make tea the most powerful package manager that the world has ever seen. If you have suggestions or thoughts on how tea could be improved even further, we'd love for you to join the discussion! </p>
+        <p class="text-center">We're currently on tea <span class="release"></span> and our tea'm and community are working hard to make tea the most powerful package manager that the world has ever seen. From our revolutionary `magic` to powerful scripts that draw upon the entire open-source ecosystem, we’re fundamentally reimagining what a package manager can be.  If you have suggestions or thoughts on how tea could be improved even further, we'd love for you to join the discussion!</p>
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             <h2 class="display-5">tea magic</h2>
-            <p>Easily access the entire open source ecosystem with tea. Simply prefix your commands with "tea" and if the tool isn't installed, tea will install it for you. Add magic to your shell scripts and use developer environments to enhance your workflow.</p>
+            <p>Easily access the entire open source ecosystem with tea. Simply prefix your commands with "tea" and if the tool isn't installed, tea will install it for you. Add magic to your shell scripts and use developer environments to enhance your workflow. magic is optional; if you don’t enable it, then just prefix your commands with `tea`.</p>
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             <h2 class="display-5">tea scripts</h2>
-            <p>This is next-generation, cross-platform package management. With tea, you no longer have to install packages—just type the commands you need and tea does the rest. Enjoy seamless and flexible version control, with the full https://semver.org spec supported.</p>
+            <p>Scripting is so powerful, but has been left in the dark ages because there’s no easy way to install the packages you need. tea can transform your scripts by leveraging the entire open source ecosystem.</p>
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         <h2 class="display-5">Getting started with tea!</h2>
-        <p class="mb-5">Tea is a cross-platform binary that can be easily installed using a curl command or by using the one-liner installer. The installer sets up tea and its shell magic without requiring "sudo" or Xcode Command Line Tools, and is compatible with Linux, macOS, and WSL. Package managers such as brew or Docker can also be used for installation, or you can use GitHub Actions to install tea as part of your workflow.</p>
+        <p class="mb-5">tea is a standalone binary for all platforms. You can curl it by itself or, if you want magic, use our installer. We provide a docker image and GitHub action for easier CI/CD.</p>
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         <h2 class="display-5 text-center">Ready to start building?<br>All you need is tea.</h2>
-        <p class="lead text-center mb-5">Introducing tea’s +pkg syntax, the ultimate tool for streamlined open source access, allowing you to access the entire ecosystem with one command, compose and combine everything, and even more.</p>
+        <p class="lead text-center mb-5">tea’s +pkg syntax embodies our core belief that good tools should just get out of the way so that you can keep making the internet a better place. Access your entire ecosystem with one command, compose and combine everything, and enjoy an all-around more delightful dev experience.</p>
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         <h2 class="display-5">OSS wouldn't work without talented contributors like you.</h2>
-        <p class="mb-5">We at tea would like to give a big shout out to all the open-source developers out there. Your contributions and dedication to making the world a better place through technology is truly admirable. Thanks to your hard work and generosity, projects like teaxyz/cli can continue to improve and evolve. If you are interested in joining our team of code crusaders, we welcome you with open arms. Head on over to the teaxyz/cli repository on Github and start contributing today! Let's continue to make a positive impact on the world of technology together.</p>
+        <p class="mb-5">We at tea would like to give a big shout out to all the open-source developers out there. Your contributions and dedication to making the world a better place through technology is truly admirable. Thanks to your hard work and generosity, projects like tea can continue to improve and evolve. If you are interested in joining our team of code crusaders, we welcome you with open arms. Head on over to the tea repository on Github and start contributing today! Let's continue to make a positive impact on the world of technology together.</p>
 
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         <h2 class="display-5">A mission to fix open-source development</h2>
         <p class="lead">tea is one of the first legitimate use cases for blockchain technology. Just as the US dollar was once backed by gold, we're building an economy that's backed <em>by code</em>.</p>
-        <p>We want to fix one of web2's biggest problems: hardworking developers <i>not</i> getting compensated for their contributions to building blocks of the internet. By leveraging blockchain technology we can keep track who creates & maintains what, remunerate them for their efforts with tea token, and keep FANG corporations from building empires atop unpaid labor.</p>
+        <p>We want to fix one of tech’s biggest problems: hardworking developers <i>not</i> getting compensated for their contributions to the building blocks of the internet. By leveraging blockchain technology we can keep track of who creates & maintains what, remunerate them for their efforts with tea tokens, and keep FAANG corporations from building empires atop unpaid labor.</p>
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